Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170805003948

thanks about you though about the leader as i have another idea of him being a defective robot that was reprogramed by Stacy's mother. the rebels are suppose to play on the not so harmless villain trope.

For the future Earth in the story, i'm doing a satire of our modern earth. plus i like sureal humor and sureal horror. also when i think of black comedy i think of things like south park or rick and morty.

well the three forms of magic interacting with each other plays a part in MCs abilty to use two of these forms of magic, which is only possible due to his mix heritage of a demon and a high elf, it is also why his powers are out of control and why he is kind of crazy and why he can interact with the artifacts of the void mirrors.

unfortunately people from other kingdoms  see magic hybrid users as avatars of the void dragon (a hybrid of all three forms and was once some one like the MC) that destroyed the void mirrors' civilization and that they will bring the end if they finger out how to use the magic of the void mirrors, the fact that the MC caused the corporation's invasion of their world by kind napping stacy enforces that belief, in fact the MC is endanger of becoming another void dragon if he uses collect all of the artifacts (seeing how they allow acssess to the magic of the void mirrors) or get very pissed off, Stacy's mother becomes very interested in the MC after learning about history of the void dragon.

I probably will write at least one chapter from the point of view the corporation in which they fight the old void dragon after they accidentally unleashed it from the planet it was imprisoned on, first to show how powerful the corporation and to show that they are not all evil. I'm also thinking of inducing that "more noble commander" character you mentioned in this chapter, and will act as the second or third antagonist.

I think i will have 4 or 5 major arcs in this story. first arc has the main characters deal with sales bot while looking for the artifacts, the the second arc has the main character try to get to and capture a machine factory and is when the war starts escalating into space, the third arc deals with the mobile fortress galaxy and the void dragon that was released, and the final arc takes place in the void ship on earth.

I just remembered that i at least thought of a last name for the MC which was Skyfield or just Sky (stacy's nickname for him) on Earth. Also Stacy's last name is Orin Which i might replace. also just realized that the void dragon sounds like AGK's Tyrant. AGK seems to have an infulanced my story before I even heard of it, weird.

You think reddit is bad you should how insane tumblr is ( it is were all of the crazy shippers are from and they actually do think they are reincarnations of fictional characters)