Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170209171934

While I actually have a rather dark and cynic sense of humour, I just don't find hybrid babies al that funny. You also don't strike me as someone with a very messed up form of humour. In general I don't follow 4chan and prefer either Reddit or Myanimelist. The people on 4chan seem less sane (well, their behaviour is anyway) on average and are certainly less polite.

That's indeed a good idea. Only their hair and eye colour is different, which Wave and Kurome should know.

Seeing Honest beg for mercy is certainly a fitting death for him. However I really liked his death in the manga because many people had the chance to get revenge against him. You can always say that Erastone was destroyed/stolen by the Revolutionary Army. I would just keep it simple and say it was destroyed when they captured Honest.

The team you speak of sounds interesting and they make for good opponents. I would have them hunt both Tatsumi/Mine and Wave/Kurome. I wouldn't use Akame's possession to much. You can say that she was captured recently and the process was incomplete before she escaped (think COD: Black Ops) or something. Also her feeling extremely guilty doesn't make much sense, since she already killed lots of members of the Revolutionary Army and "innocent" people before she joined the Night Raid (just read Zero). If she couldn't cope with that kind of guilt or rationalize it, she would have had a mental breakdown long ago.

I get the ending you are going for but h ow far do you exactly plan to take Tyrant's fusion with Tatsumi? So do you plan to leave the story of Wave and Kurome open-ended? Whre exactly are Kurome and Wave transported to? Maybe they briefly pass through Aperture's ruined laboratory before being send back to their universe? Also how are you going to write around Kurome's drug addition? Some cure Aperture Science came up with? The rest of the ending is fitting as long as too many innocent people don't perish along with the Capital.