Thread:Davin111/@comment-29707934-20170214220316/@comment-25132749-20170216213855

Don't worry about criticisms in fact the "replace Stacy's brain with an AI or computer" to be a better idea than the soul replacement thing as it fits one of the themes of the corporate faction. plus i have be getting ride of concepts that i decided to be stupid or wouldn't fit the story. though i must warn you i am a really stubborn person.

though i have been scaling down the size of the setting to just a few universes and i am think of having it take place in just two universes with them just traveling across just one fantasy world, though the corporation would still be from another universe entirely. It would be much easier to work with as i already have a map drawn out for both worlds and it would be a waste not to explore them.

Note: i find it ironic in you latest edit that you compared Stacy to Mine as they are from polar opposite backgrounds while Mine was a member of a oppressed race, Stacy is a member of the race doing the oppressing. Also stacy like the rest of her family, relies more on her intelligent and technology rather than direct combat. her weapon was going to be a rocket luancher before deciding on a plasma weapon.