Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170205201615

It's a really great idea to give the advisors personalities based on the parts of the mind. That's really interesting and show that they are parts of a greater mind. Having them talk is indeed easier to follow and shows the difference with their telepathic/telekinetic abilities.

I agree that Tatsumi's partially fused version looks much cooler. He is also better suited for interesting fight scenes and it makes the romance less awkward after the fusion.

Icertainly like the fact that Bols' family doesn't have the same horrible deaths as in the series. I was under the impression that the story would only be a few years in the future, not 72. You can't use most of the characters that way. Those that are still alive would around 90 years old and probably be in a nursing home and/or senile.

Wave has a strong sense of justice and morals, he would try to improve the fate of the people if possible. As long as it doesn't endanger Kurome, who is his first priority at all times. He would just attack the Combine as he obviously can't change them through diplomacy and internal change. Kurome probably goes into a homocidal rage when she hears anyone has hurt her sister in any way. Are you going to write their romance to or just say that they are a couple from the start?

I really like the idea of multiple viewpoints in the story. It makes it more interesting in my opinion. It's also a good idea since Tatsumi and Wave are literally designed to be each others foil.

That would indeed be a funny scene. Esdeath reaction to seeing Tatsumi again and Mine's reaction to that can also be very funny.