Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170808195108

I took some time to respond. The reason: our PC broke down, my PC is at my "residence" (you know what I mean, not a room but not really an appartement either) near university and my sister has my laptop and is on vacation.

I think a defective robot is a far better idea than the Santa claus/pirate hybrid.

I like dark humour too. Not a fan of south park though, since I greatly dislike "dirty humour". Dry wit and sarcasm I usually enjoy more.

While I like the MC is special/has a special power, there again must be some reason for the void dragon and difference between the systems. Except just for a battle, for which any powerful being would do without as much backstory. Otherwise it just adds unnecessary complexity and you could just say he was born with a unusual power, as a few were before him.

4 or 5 arcs are a lot. I would begin with writing something substantially shorter.

I like the name Skyfield fine (there's also the clear contradiction in the name, which hints at his duality). It also fits with Richard. I don't like Orin though. Stacy Orin doesn't sound good in my opinion, and the style of the name is completely different.

I don't think reddit or the people I have a discussion with are bad at all. It's just that people have the tendency to claim something is a fact without proof, which annoys me.