Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170809211615

I never heard of that show.

That's why i am thinking of changing it, but i still want them them to have distinctive form of magic to make the artificial nature of the corporation to seem even more like an out of context-problem. I also have this idea of the void mirrors being refugees that created the fantasy universe after the corporation destroyed their old one with the void ship's super-weapon. It also kind of make the fate that they are no long around kind of sad.

The void dragon might also be necessary to defeat the sale-bot's main body (were he keeps he core) do to it being a dreadnought landship spider, which are huge machines that can wipe out entire countries by it self and are nicknamed genocide machines. also the void dragon might also try useing the MC's yandere and protective nature towards stay as a way to corrupt him.

I don't think they are too young (most stories have the characters that young dealing with worse things, heck the characters from NGE was 13-14) and your age rang i find makes them too old for the story thus kind of ruins it, plus both the drama and the comedy comes from the fact they are too young for these events, plus remember the MC isn't human and Stacy hass cybernetics in her head so they might be able to handly more serious stuff.