Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170104021052

Sheele being killed by Esdeath coul be interesting. Especially since it will fuel Mine's rage and determination to personally kill Esdeath. The technology from the last war that's uncovered explains the weapons. In combination with perfector they can be modified or repaired.

Lubbock's Teigu, Cross tail (one of my favourite's BTW), can manipulate threads. It's trump card, Realm-Cutting Thread (or world-Severing thread in the anime), is extremely stong and razor sharp. But doesn't have the Bolo defences like shields that would make it useless? Otherwise it could be used to ensnare and hinder the cannons of the Bolo. Najenda directly attack without enough intel seems a bit out of character. It's more Esdeath or even Budo's style.

I have never played Fallout, but both its world and AGK seem dark and revolve around survival, so I guess a crossover against a corrupt force would work rather well. If the AGK character don't have much problems with radiation at least.

I would recommend first writing the shorter story about the Bolo destroying the Empire first. The concept is good but also simple and straightforward. You can use what you learn by writing a short fanfic for the creation of the Half-Life fanfic or the longer Bolo fanfic later. Maybe you realize while you are writing which elements work well with each other and which don't.