Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170210212356

Hopefully your internet is back up and running smoothly. Usually I only have time to answer once a day, so I don't think your answers are slow at all. Mine take much longer. Amusingly enough, I also prefer to not go outside if I can avoid it. That being said, I still have to do so at least 5 days a week for University and usually more than that. The only reason I ever go to 4chan is also for the early fan translations.

The characters might briefly believe Tatsumi and Mine died, but I wouldn't isolate them completely in the end. Their close friends should know about their survival and where they live. I do like the idea that the G-men gives them a reward.

Personally, I really hate open endings. I think that stories should be closed, and it greatly annoys me when they don't end properly (and don't have a sequel or some form of follow-up). That's because in my opinion, the ending is one of the most important parts of the story and it can really damage the overall narrative if it isn't statisfying. Once again, that's just my personal opinion.

I like the idea that Aperture cures Kurome for research purposes (that really in character for them). Who's in charge of Aperture Science? Our friend Cave Johnson and his lemons or GlaDOS (or Caroline before she became a part of GLaDOS)?

What kind of fiction do you want to write? I have a sneaking suspicion that if their is a romance in the story, the main female character is going to be a tsundere. Anyway, fanfiction is certainly a good way to improve your writing skills, see what works and what doesn't and to get some reviews of your work.