Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170207205408

Well, protecting one's mate certainly isn't an instinct for a lot of animals, and Tyrant seems like a solitary animal. That being said, it still works as an explanation because Tyrant is a creature that follows its instincts and can encourage Tatsumi to do the same. Protecting your loved ones is extremely important for humans.

I wouldn't make the characters older than 30 (but better in their late twenties), which means a time jump of around 12-13 years at most. Personally I would make a time jump of 10-11 years in your story.

While the Emperor could act  like that, he could also condemn Honest actions. In any case, his connections with loyal subjects could be of much use.

I would certainly have Tatsumi and Mine interact with Wave and Kurome and certain points in the story. They can meet or just talk over a phone or transmitter. I really like the sub-plot with Kurome and her realization. Wave's ideals being tested by his enemy is also a good idea. He could also force Wave to choose between people who can save.

Having Akame kill Esdeath while she breakes free from the Combine control is a interesting idea. I don't find such a broadcast itself a funny thing, but some characters' reactions on it can be funny.

Having the G-man contact the Night Raid with a request is a really good way to start the story and grab readers' attention. It also gives Tatsumi and Mine a clear lead they can follow for more information.