Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170809211615

I never heard of that show. i also just realized just how many of cartoons a watched as a kid are really dark comedy, like courage the cowardly dog, invader zim, and the grim adventures of billy and mady, those shows were dark, heck in invader zim a child got his eyes ripped out by the title character.

That's why i am thinking of changing it, but i still want them them to have distinctive form of magic to make the artificial nature of the corporation to seem even more like an out of context-problem. I also have this idea of the void mirrors being refugees that created the fantasy universe after the corporation destroyed their old one with the void ship's super-weapon. It also kind of make the fate that they are no long around kind of sad.

The void dragon might also be necessary to defeat the sale-bot's main body (were he keeps he core) do to the main body being one of those dreadnought landship spider, which are huge machines that can wipe out entire countries by it self and are nicknamed genocide machines. also the void dragon might also try useing the MC's yandere and protective nature towards Stacy as a way to corrupt him. The void dragon

I don't think they are too young (most stories have the characters that young or even younger dealing with worse things, heck the characters from NGE were 13-14) and your suggested age range i find makes them too old for the story thus kind of ruins what i'm going for, plus both the drama and the comedy comes from the fact they are too young to understand these events.

also remember the MC isn't human and Stacy has cybernetics in her head so they will be able to handle why more serious stuff then what a kid is normal is suppose to be able, plus them being too young to handle this (the MC thinks they can anyways) stuff is kind of a point of the story as i want to deconstruct the kid hero trope and the MC's powers awaken when he hits puberty at the beginning of the story. This is one of those things that i will not change no matter what.