Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170103020223

I would give them tanks and other weaponary that can oppose the Bolo (Golem tanks, a incomplete/reverse engineerd/insane Bolo and smaller Shikoutazer's are all good idea's). You certainly need  a massive numerical advantage if the difference in offensive capabilities and technology is this large. You could also increase the power and abilities of the Teigu's (enhancing them by recoverd technology or something). This always the characters from AGK to put up a fight against the Bolo. It think most fans prefer this to a battle between tanks and the characters from AGK just happen to be present.

Which members of Night Raid are allied with the Bolo? Are you going to write a long story where both the Bolo and its allies have significant fights? What do you intend to focus on? It isn't really clear to me anymore how you intend your story to go. You have plenty of ideas that would make for a interesting fanfic, but I don't think it would work when you combine to many of them unless you are going to write a really long story. And since it is your first fanfic, I wouldn't make it to long.

If you want Najenda to escape, a distraction of some kind or a way to trick the Bolo are usually the most engaging to read. Maybe Lubbock found a way to temporary distract/deceive the Bolo. That would also give more emotional weight to Lubbock's death if it occured only a short time before.