Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170211185352

i came up with this idea years ago (2012 to be accurate) so i had enough time to think about it and have scrapped or changed other ideas already. in fact some of the ideas i mentioned i have scrapped or changed even before you even commented. heck this story was very different when i first though of it. there are also things in this story that i will never change. most ideas that i scrape are the result of me forgeting about them.

the main reason the plot is fragmented and convoluted at the moment is because i'm more focused on the characters factions and setting than the plot right. i make the setting,characters and factions first and build a plot around those it makes the wirtting the story easer. in fact the setting, characters and factions of this story are what i want to talk to you about.

the main goal is basically find the 8 objects (or should i say creatures) before the other factions do as they are the key controlling the multiverse. I might scrap this goal for another.

the gods are the only ones trying to use the objects for power. the Crystal faction is looking for them because the objects in question are literally part of their massive family though they are still revenge driven and are unable to forgive their enemies. The evolutionary faction, being the tribal primitives they are, is looking for them just to eat them, which would break reality. the corporation isn't aware of them at all and are actually looking for the main group instead.

The corporation is the overarching villain and will be supplying the other factions with weapons.

the basics of the story is basically a multidimensional war between magic and technology was started because the hero just had to bring his tsundere childhood friend to show her this new world he was summoned to thus causing her CEO grand father to freak out about her being missing which causes the corporation to tear apart the multiverse looking for her. It doesn't help that the hero is kind of yandere for her due to her being the only one that was nice to him during childhood. the hero is also trying to run away from his life on earth.

actually the above paragraph is actually a more simple idea than i realized and it just needs a goal.

You are right about the martian brain, i think i should just stick with it being a villain that messes with and snarks at the father character every time they meet, as in it acts like that one version of the master from doctor who. It is not actually a martian brain it's just called that I actually just though of this story idea a few days ago so i'm still trying to figure things out. So how original is the premise of the second story.

the concept of both the parent and child having connection to a very different masquerades is interesting to me. It creates the drama of the them both finding out about that their family member was fighting against something that could kill them even though the they could of help each other in protecting the world.

To be honest you actually responded better than I thought you would.