Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170113135054

Eden sounds like an interesting character, but I still don't really get how he can efficiently make decisions. Well, its a game so logic doesn't really matter that much. I would only use one president though. That's more clear and gives the story a more defined goal.

I really like your ideas for Frank Horrigan and his role in the story. This fanfic sounds like the one with the best story. Esdeath slowly dying from radiation poisoning is also a great idea. The prime minister indeed wouldn't get any mercy, but it's not like he got any from Leone. His death can hardly be more horrible than it already was.

I don't really hate Louise, (I "hate" Champ for example) but I find her to be extremely annoying. I don't think that she acted as a yandere either (not even in the scene you mention). She is just extremely agressive and unreasonable tsundere with an absolutely horrible scream. She does indeed always overact and in a violent way (What! That boy I treat as a dog, whip, yell at and physically and magically assault an a regular basis looks at a girl who is nice to him and doesn't look like she's ten years old. Let's blow up the ingrate while yelling once again).

Yanderes and tsunderes are indeed both jealous. There combination can exist, but as I said earlier it would just be a sweet girl ("deredere" with a bit of a jealous streak) or a pychopathic and agressive girl. Both of which exisct already, however the latter combo is almost never used because it doesn't make much sense.