Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170716020012

if you think about it the mother kind of represents how cruel and uncareing the uppers class is to everyone including their own children.

the brain replacement thing is suppose is to show that while stacy is biologically human she might actually be just an AI in a human body (since birth infact), which freaks the other characters out and to show that nothing is natural in the corporation, not even the humans that lives under it. It also sent out a SOS to the corporation after Stacy got stress when she wakes up and discovers that she is on another world (she was asleep when the MC brought her there).

That is actually a good idea. though i might scrap her and make the void mirrors a extinct precursor race. in fact i'm now scrapping the mirrors and the hive and the sub factions will now only play a minor role of world building to focus purely on the corporation vs magic conflict.

the prince guy is actually a parody of edgy and antsy characters and he thinks he has it the worst even though stacy and the MC have crapper lives.

i should tell you that the story is suppose to mostly comedic and absurd in a dark way (black comedy) and only getting serious when dealing with the big threats or when the characters problems are in the spot light. heck the MC is supose to be a Heroic Comedic Sociopath whos morals mostly revolves purely around Stacy (like most yanderes actually) but his reason for being like that will be played  serious.

the thing is i'm not good at nameing things though what the child and her friends themselves are called shadow hunters.

as i said the child has very powerful magic so they are trying to protect her, plus her friends wanted to see what her home was like. you mean father and daughter, plus the real contention is though the deceased mother who was a retired (and rather powerful) shadow hunter and was killed by a alien that runs a mafia and works for that race of alien brains.

the reason they never come in contact before is because both groups don't operate outside there respective countries though according to MAJESTIC there was an incident in japan with agents fighting unknown "aliens" in 1853.

also plot armor only apply to the Majestic agents and death flags only apply to the shadow hunters unless one of the agents sacrifice themselves for one of the kids.

you know i actually want to make a sprite based open world game with a wanted meter in the world of this story from the bad guys point of view.

but i do know what story i want to write, which in the first one is a story in which a fantasy world gets invaded by a extremely powerful corporation, all because the MC brought his childhood friend (and heiress to that corporation) to that world. the story is basically he trying to use the fantasy world to escape his problems only for the very thing causing said problems (aka O.S.A.T.R.I.N. corp.)  follows him and are now destroying/corrupting that world as well.