Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20161219090247

Something like Lubbock first working with Najenda and after she commits several atrocities, he fakes his own death and founds a rebellion would be a good idea. Having people operate undercover is generally a useful plot device in this kind of stories.

The Docter's reputation and regeneration would certainly shock Night Raid. Esdeath would probably want to fight him, it kind of her usual routine when meeting strong opponents not affiliated with the Empire.

Some kind of argumented human using a teigu seems like a good antagonist to me.

AGK en Portal seem a bit difficult to combine so I would keep that part rather brief. However, It also has interesting options. For example, hey could take a brief tour through Aperture Science, solve a few rooms and encounter GLaDOS, Cave Johnson or even Wheatly.