Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170809203800

I didn't say I "hate" that kind of humor per se, it's just that jokes about bodily fluids for example really aren't my thing. Dry with and sarcasm can be dark humour, that depends on the subject matter. I guess you could say if find "British humour" pretty enjoyable in general. My favourite comedy show is Yes, prime minister.

Doesn't holy magic render void and demon magic obsolete since it can do more than both combined? I like the idea that each race has a distinctive form of magic though.

I see, that could be a good addition if it's done in an interesting way. The dragon could deliver comments or bargain for power with the MC, like "the Corruption/Corruptor" trope.

12 is really to young to start your story. Especially since the events are pretty serious and not that easy to cope with. I think 16-20 is a much better range than 12-16 for your story.