Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170102015031

As I said earlier, the Bolo is much to powerful for the universe of AGK. You need to weaken it (an other hightech advanced weaponary) significantly for the battle to be interesting. Maybe it has lost most of its capabilities, is of a lower mark, has additional flaws... or something. Now it can just destroy the Capital and its armies in a few shots. Or just create massive eathquakes/ Tsunamis by manipulating the tectonic plates. :-)

The Imperium of Men is quite brutal. They also have mercyless commanders and genetically engineerd soldiers, but they are more blindly religiously devoted and (mostly) not corrupt. The Chaos Marines could be an interesting addition to AGK if weakend.

Dangerbeast and Anti-Bolo weaponary sounds cool. I hope some it it will be effective, otherwise the story quickly becomes quite boring if nothing poses a threat whatsoever.

Tatsumi and the other members of the Nightraid obviously aren't fond of genocide. But the opposing armies should be really terrified after learning that the Bolo depopulated entire planets.

I like your idea about Lubbock's death. It suits his personality and it could have an interesting effect on Najenda's character. However, would most of the weaponary of the Bolo not just pulverize Najenda and her surroundings? While would it launch a small scale attack when it could crush the entire opposing force with ease? Also, laser beams and plasma normally move to quick to react to, even for AGK.