Thread:Darkmindflayer/@comment-4472846-20120715005054/@comment-4472846-20120715043925

a little bit. i just want to make it match with the other character's pages. i'd really hate to delete everything you've written on Esdese's page, but just in my opinion we really don't need it all, such as the whole section where it talks about hers and Najenda's expedition to the Tribe. It could be written much shorter. Basically we want the parts where her history describes her personality and abilities, such as writing about how she orders her soldiers to violate the village and how she uses her Teigu to freeze an entire river