Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170808210327

I myself have a fear of my computer breaking down do to the damage on the side of it, still don't know how it happened. good thing i inherited my grandfather's labtop and save all my work on a hard drive.

Well, humor that is dirty, violent, shocking, disturbing, offensive and/or surreal is very popular here in my country (or at least my state), which is why people copy south park all the time. also I don not really considered Dry wit and sarcasm to be black comedy as that is normal comedy. well comedy (and horror) is the most subjective thing in existence after. So you might not like or understand the humor in my story do to the fact that i do like the very humor you hate.

Note: anything between the theses lines may be scraped or changed

I have to flesh out what makes the types of magic (i wouldn't call them systems as magic works similar to familiar of zero's magic) different, i already figured out that what kind of magic you can use depends on your genetic code, demon magic involves altering ones body, and void magic involves controlling warping and creating the elements, and the holy magic is the typical stuff you would find in a fantasy setting. the holy and demonic magic are do have some elements of void magic in them which is why hybrid magic users can learn to use it. just being able to use two types of magic is considered to be unnatural plus void magic is something only the void mirrors, great devils and gods can use.

though i might change all of this as i found it too limiting for the types of spells that can be used and i can't seem to fit it with the void mirrors new role of the dead precursor race that create the universe. though what spell you can use will still be based on species.

The Void dragon is suppose to be what the MC is in danger of turning into, also i'm kind of also want the MC to be a reincarnation of this void dragon (which is do to his unique heritage) instead of it being a another antagonist to play on the enemy within trope plus it would also be helpful to still give the MC the special power he needs for the artifacts (called the mirrors of reality) if i decide to get ride of the "there being three difference types of magic" thing going on in the above paragraph.

I don't think 4 arcs are a lot plus it depends on how long each arc is, though i want this to quit a long story. also the story will begin when Stacy and Sky are 11 and 12 and end when they are 15 and 16 so 4 years would of passed at the end of the story.

I kind of agree with Stacy's last name not being a good name, but it sort of stuck for too long. Also for the discussion which should call the MC by his nickname Sky.