Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20170208192254

I know your general interntion is correct and that indeed every (complex) living organism wants to pass on their genes in some way. However there are many examples (praying mantis and spiders are famous examples) where animals don't care about their mates at all. I don't think that Tyrant was necessary the only one of its kind, it's just that those danger beasts where hunt to extinction because they were literally very dangerous beasts. I would just use it to create a contrast with the Combine anyway.

I certainly agree that domestic situation in the end is very, very weird. Honestly, I would rather have them both die or Tatsumi not entirely becoming a dragon to start a more funtional family with Mine. This just creates so many problems when you think about it. Also, if the "children" translation is correct than I just assume that Mine had twins or something. Please don't have Mine give birth to a dragon, I really only see the disturbing side of this idea. The situation isn't very comedic at all.

Tatsumi and Mine (and Wave and Kurome) would want to fix the problem so people can have children again. But neither them nor Wave and Kurome seem interested in having children in the manga, so I guess they wouldn't be too disturbed. Seeing Bols' daughter all grown up would really make them fully realize the effects of the time jump.

Bols is indeed a good pick to shelter the Emperor because of his caring personality. While being able to use the supreme Teigu is certainly a bonus, I would also have him gather intel thanks to a network of people that stayed loyal to the royal family. Honest being killed with Leone involved in some way is a good idea. It fits both their characters. I would have the Combine execute Honest to gain some popularity among the people.

I use Akame as an ally after she breaks free from  the Combine control. I would be careful about her trump card since its effects and aspecially after effects were never really made clear in the manga. I would just have Akame kill Esdeath quickly after a battle. That seems like the course of events that makes the most sense to me.

It's a fitting end (heavily based on the manga, I assume) to reward them with some peace and quiet. The G-Man is also a good pick to give them their home (and eventual treatment) as reward for their services. However I wouldn't isolate Tatsumi and Mine completely from their friends. How do you plan on ending Wave and Kurome's story? Also, how are you going to write Kurome's drug addiction? I don't think she usually brings along enough medicine for the entire story. Are you going to have the G-man cure it as a gift when he transports them into the future?