Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-25132749-20170218001746

I am guessing the reason you find Stacy's mother to be a more  compelling villain is because she is related to one of the main characters. Even though she would be just as evil Honest she still has more of a reason to be evil though not by much. She will also meet her end at the hands of the super computer when it decides to help the main characters at the end. also the fact that Stacy is being abuse by her mother i think i will make into a spoiler.

Since you asked about souls in this story i will tell you. if the human brain is a organic computer than the soul is a organic operating system. How ever i now prefer the idea of the corporation replacing the human brain or at least half of it with computers.

The MC isn't stupid he is just crazy and likes to annoy Stacy. The reason he ran away is do to desire to be a hero and for change do to the state of the world he grew up in and the reason he took Stacy with him was to get her away from her abusive mother who he hates for abusing and eventually killing his own mother thus leaving him as a orphan. But Stacy herself doesn't actually understand why he dragged her along into this other world as she has deluded herself into believing her own mother is not abusive to her as a copping mechanism.

There is third main character that is suppose to be a Void Mirror reincarnated into a dark elf. She has the power to see into other peoples minds. She also joined the main group by accident and non of the other characters knows she is a void Mirror let alone their leader, though Stacy is specious of her. there are also two other characters that will be in the main group one is the MC's half-sister and the other a elf prince from a neighboring kingdom.

also i think i should tell you the name of the corporation. the name of it is "Omni-Science and Advance Technology Research Industrial Network" or O.S.A.T.R.I.N. corp.

Yeah i couldn't think about a better name for the Committee and might have the characters make fun of it's name for being so lame. also the name Majestic 12 is actually comes from a real area 51 conspiracy theory and in the story, the 12 refers to the 12 branches of MAJESTIC.

the committee is also losing it war against the demon witch and her army shadow maidens and shadow beasts though MAJESTIC will ends up being a large  thorn in her side do to her not being use to fighting against them. The demon witch and the leader of the Committee are actually sisters turned enemies and are both youkai. the demon witch hates humanity as she believes humans destroyed her home and killed her family. What she doesn't know is that it was destroyed by the aliens.

there will also be this running joke with a framer witnessing both the magic and alien sides of the story. with no one believing him about the magic stuff and two MAJESTIC agents keep harassing him into not telling anyone about the alien stuff.

also i think the story should begin with the child coming home to the USA after being a exchange student in japan, japan being were she join the supernatural Committee, however as the child having powerful, magic the demon witch sends one of her commanders after her. both father and child discover each others secret when they both end up investigating the same place. also the child brought some of her friends from japan and the committee with her.

also after discovering other side they will try to tell their co workers but they don't believe them at first until the father provides the boss of his branch, the women in white, with proof, than MAJESTIC will try to contacting the committee.

MAJESTIC's HQ is located on a large spaceship in orbit above the US while the committee's is a large castle some were in japan but is always teleporting from place to place so the demon witch can't find it.