User blog comment:MAD SOULER/Sorry for the bother/@comment-1746153-20141008155047

First off, writing stuff like this makes it look like you're fishing for compliments. Don't do that.

Second, always use proper grammar and don't add excess info. Keep it formal, keep in mind that you're not writing for your own pleasure, but for others to read.

Third, try to keep an eye on formatting (as in, where you insert images and all that). If you're using Visual Editor, stop that and use the code view instead. It will give you a better image of what you're doing with the page's source.