Thread:RCM9698/@comment-25132749-20161215190227/@comment-29707934-20161219010654

I also don't know much about Half-Life, but both Breen and Najenda could work. I don't see why you couldn't use Lubbock if Najenda is the enemy. He is in love with her, but that doesn't mean he would gladly aid her in any situation. If anything, using Najenda and Lubbock would make the story more tragic. Danger beast/human hybrids could work to, but I would't use to many kinds of different enemies. Using hybrids, mechanical soldiers, starships and ther revolutionary army is a but much. The same aplies for the characters. If you aren't going to write about say 25 chapters, throwing in to many subplots doesn't seem like a good idea. The Emperor going in to hiding for example is not a bad idea, but its not needed in an shorter story.

I am a very big fan of Doctor Who (especially Matt Smith's Eleventh Doctor), so I certainly would be interested in a crossover.

Once again, I don't know much about Half-Life, but I would rather go with an enhanced human as the "final boss". Defeating a machine just isn't as emotionally statisfying, at least to me.